Subject Line: Investment Association open to Logan locals
Dear Emily,
I thought you and your readers might be interested in Information regarding the Cache Valley Area Investors Association.
The CVAIA is a free association where members of all ages meet to discuss information that helps people to become financially independent with a philosophy of looking about money and opportunity in a different way also with education on how to save and how to invest with less risk.
The meetings are every other Thursday at the Cache Valley Chamber of Commerce at 160 N. Main Street. The next meeting will be on Feb. 7.
If you want any more information you can give me a call at 435-875-3247 or email me at ariwade@hotmail.com. You can also contact the founder by email at preston.parker@usu.edu. If you are available Friday, February 22 in the afternoon we could get lunch and discuss the topic further.
Thanks,
Ariel-Leigh Wade
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4 comments:
Good Media Pitch. All I can think of is to lowercase the first letter of "information," maybe seperate it out into paragraphs and to try to make it sound urgent so they won't put it off. But you did a great job!
Good job, you got a lot of information into not a lot of space.
Put the person's contact info right before the salutation in the beginning.
Nice to mention how this association relates not only to the person you are pitching to, but also to the readers. making this connection explicit will help make your pitch more successful.
Put your contact info at the bottom after your name. Identify your relationship with the association.
The association is not free, the meeting are.
You would put a date at the beginning.
Also, have your call to action sentence at the end be a separate paragraph so it stands out.
Great pitch! smooth to read and understandable.
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